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"Where is he?"
"This is ridiculous."
"Excuse me. Ma'am?"
"You'll have to come closer. I can't hear you."
"That's better. What can I do for you?"
"I was wondering if you'd seen a friend of mine."
"What's he look like?"
"Well, he's not a friend exactly. He's sort of the narrator."
"That still doesn't tell me what he looks like."
"Have you seen anyone around here tonight?"
"Besides you?"
"Yeah."
"Oh! There was this one fellow. He was waiting over there by those columns, when all of a sudden, he turned into a werewolf and ran off."
"How could you tell he was waiting?"
"He kept looking around aimlessly, and he was holding a pen and paper but not writing anything."
"Great, that must have been him."
"Well, if it was, I assure you he was in no condition to be narrating anything."
"Now what am I supposed to do?"
"What are you asking me for?"
"All I know is, there's supposed to be an unexpected transformation tonight, and he's supposed to take notes."
"I told you he turned into a werewolf. Are you sure that wasn't it?"
"But the story hadn't even started yet!"
"Wait a sec. It's not even dark yet!"
"You're not too clear on this 'unexpected' thing, are you?"
"All right. Suppose he did turn into a werewolf and run off. Why are you so casual about it?"
"Once you've seen one werewolf transformation, you've seen 'em all."
"But you're in the news business!"
"Just because I sell newspapers doesn't mean I report news. Besides, I see much more interesting things here than that."
"Such as?"
"Fine, be that way. Who's gonna know either way?"
"What do you mean?"
"Without a narrator, no one's gonna know what happened."
"Do you really want your whole life on display?"
"Well, not my whole life. But certainly the important parts!"
"What for?"
"I'll make you a deal. Help me close up, and then come have coffee with me. I'll teach you a thing or two about this city. But forget about the narrator, OK?"
"This is ridiculous."
"Excuse me. Ma'am?"
"You'll have to come closer. I can't hear you."
"That's better. What can I do for you?"
"I was wondering if you'd seen a friend of mine."
"What's he look like?"
"Well, he's not a friend exactly. He's sort of the narrator."
"That still doesn't tell me what he looks like."
"Have you seen anyone around here tonight?"
"Besides you?"
"Yeah."
"Oh! There was this one fellow. He was waiting over there by those columns, when all of a sudden, he turned into a werewolf and ran off."
"How could you tell he was waiting?"
"He kept looking around aimlessly, and he was holding a pen and paper but not writing anything."
"Great, that must have been him."
"Well, if it was, I assure you he was in no condition to be narrating anything."
"Now what am I supposed to do?"
"What are you asking me for?"
"All I know is, there's supposed to be an unexpected transformation tonight, and he's supposed to take notes."
"I told you he turned into a werewolf. Are you sure that wasn't it?"
"But the story hadn't even started yet!"
"Wait a sec. It's not even dark yet!"
"You're not too clear on this 'unexpected' thing, are you?"
"All right. Suppose he did turn into a werewolf and run off. Why are you so casual about it?"
"Once you've seen one werewolf transformation, you've seen 'em all."
"But you're in the news business!"
"Just because I sell newspapers doesn't mean I report news. Besides, I see much more interesting things here than that."
"Such as?"
"Fine, be that way. Who's gonna know either way?"
"What do you mean?"
"Without a narrator, no one's gonna know what happened."
"Do you really want your whole life on display?"
"Well, not my whole life. But certainly the important parts!"
"What for?"
"I'll make you a deal. Help me close up, and then come have coffee with me. I'll teach you a thing or two about this city. But forget about the narrator, OK?"
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this is great the narratator becomes a werewolf
but you need to make the characters wiser and better to talk with each other
it also needs a better explanation how he became it and more clues about it
probaly also make the story better for good rates and so viewers will be more likely to be interested in it
also needs improvement and more hardwork not like your chating to somebody in the phone
you can also try to improve it by gathering ideas from other creators
like going and searching from other good word and thats how to improve your things